Beyondthepale12

Your submission at Articles for creation: Joel M. Toledo (March 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Curb Safe Charmer was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 19:59, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Hello, Beyondthepale12! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 19:59, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Joel M. Toledo has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Joel M. Toledo. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 10:52, 30 March 2021 (UTC)

@Theroadislong: I've edited the draft based on your comment on Draft:Joel M. Toledo. I also removed the Autobiography template because I'm not the subject and do not personally know him. I'm just new to Wikipedia so I really appreciate all the help and advice. If I can further improve the article, please let me know. Many thanks! Beyondthepale12 (talk) 09:16, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Resubmitted draft

@Curb Safe Charmer: Hi, thank you so much for your work here. I've just supplied reliable sources on Draft:Joel M. Toledo , awaiting re-review.