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Hi this is Ruquiya. I cannot understand the specific reason for decline. Read more like an advertisement or neutral point of view, i think my article about Aarti BR Singh is not at all an advertisement. Its her life journey. I have given many references which i believe are independent. Ruquiya Jabeen (talk) 08:30, 18 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Ruquiya Jabeen: examples of promotional langugage: "bold personality", "incredibly autonomous", "two lovely children", "most ambitious girl", "effectively raising her children", "sacrificing her entire career". While you have added references, they are not inline, so it is impossible to see which statements can be verified by which references. See Help:Footnotes and Help:Referencing for beginners with citation templates. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 11:52, 18 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for detail description. Allow me sometime to check them. Ruquiya Jabeen (talk) 07:44, 21 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Proposed updates for Dark Castle Entertainment

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Hi Curb Safe Charmer, I am trying to update the Dark Castle Entertainment article. I see that you are a member of WP:Companies and that you have successfully worked on many articles, so I thought you might be interested in helping to update the page. I hope you will consider implementing the edit request I posted at Talk:Dark Castle Entertainment#Proposed updates. Thanks for your help, DJ for Katz (talk) 14:37, 24 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

As you've tagged your comment as an edit request, an editor will be along in due course to consider your request. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 19:06, 24 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for your time, DJ for Katz (talk) 15:59, 26 June 2024 (UTC)Reply