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Peer Review: Hey Kennedy. I think that you did really well on your first draft your sources were cited very well and your sentence structure was great. I also feel that you were very aware of the format of Wikipedia. To improve I suggest that you maybe elaborate on some of the organizations that Baldacchino is involved in (the ones without hyperlinks). I feel like you related her to human rights by listing the work that she does and the groups of people that she is defending but to improve you could but maybe say a few of the challenges faced by the group that she is defending to add more to the article on the history side of things. Overall though I think this was a great contribution. Loved the little box thing on the side maybe add a picture though. Zlee223 (talk) 19:40, 8 November 2018 (UTC)zlee223Reply

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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kwalke26.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 13:59, 18 January 2022 (UTC)Reply