 | Jamie Drysdale is currently a Other sports good article nominee. Nominated by — GhostRiver at 18:37, 17 April 2024 (UTC) An editor has placed this article on hold to allow improvements to be made to satisfy the good article criteria. Recommendations have been left on the review page, and editors have seven days to address these issues. Improvements made in this period will influence the reviewer's decision whether or not to list the article as a good article. Short description: Canadian ice hockey player (born 2002) |
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GA Review
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Jamie Drysdale/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 18:37, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 17:05, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I will complete a review in the next couple of days. -Riley1012 (talk) 17:05, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
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1. Well-written
Great job on the prose, I have no suggestions here.
2. Verifiable
The article uses reliable sources and has a proper references section. Passes copyvio check
- Spot check:
- No issues: 2, 5, 8, 10, 15, 17, 23, 26, 34, 40, 46, 50, 55, 65
3. Broad
- The youngest defenceman on the Otters that season, Drysdale told reporters that he hoped the team would "be competitive all year round". This sentence should be removed- the quote isn't providing anything interesting or new (presumably everyone would want their team to be competitive...)
- As a child, Drysdale wore No. 4 as a tribute to Bobby Orr, one of his father's favourite players. During his time in Anaheim, he was roommates with teammate Trevor Zegras. The first sentence can be moved to the Early life section, and the second sentence can be removed entirely. The Personal life section should be deleted unless there's more information you can add.
4. Neutral
The article is neutral.
5. Stable
The article is stable day-to-day.
6. Illustrated
The image used is free use and has a relevant caption.
GhostRiver (talk · contribs) I've completed my review; let me know if you have any questions. -Riley1012 (talk) 20:38, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- @GhostRiver: Pinging again since it has been a week. I noticed you're on a wikibreak of sorts, so I am willing to keep this open until you're back. I hope all is well. -Riley1012 (talk) 13:00, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Also just realizing I forgot to put the article on hold, will do that now. -Riley1012 (talk) 13:01, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the ping, letting you know I've seen the edits and will address them as soon as I have the brainpower. — GhostRiver 05:09, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- Also just realizing I forgot to put the article on hold, will do that now. -Riley1012 (talk) 13:01, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @GhostRiver: Pinging again since it has been a week. I noticed you're on a wikibreak of sorts, so I am willing to keep this open until you're back. I hope all is well. -Riley1012 (talk) 13:00, 30 June 2024 (UTC)