Talk:Éléonore de Bourbon

Latest comment: 27 days ago by Sfar13 in topic Unclear topic need more info

Unclear topic need more info

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DilutedSprite you added that a section needed clarification but didnt specify what was unclear. Thankful if you gave more information. Sfar13 (talk) 11:18, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi! Thanks for asking. Specifically, I was looking at the phrasing and syntax in the 4th paragraph. Specifically the line "In November 1609 her brother Henri and his wife Charlotte de Montmorency arrived in Brussels seeking asylum at the court the archdukal couple Albrecht and Isabella from Henry IV who wanted to make Eleonores sister in-law his mistress." DilutedSprite (talk) 17:19, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Aha, well I can see how that would seem confusing. I have a tendency to make too long sentences and sometimes some words will drop when writing on my phone - sorry I will try to make it more clear. Thank you for replying back! Sfar13 (talk) 21:49, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply