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The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 03:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

Paraelongatoolithus

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5x expanded by Ashorocetus (talk). Self-nominated at 07:38, 27 February 2016 (UTC).

  • Article expansion is recent enough and the prose parts are long enough. Article seems neutral to me. Lead needs sourcing as does part of the third paragraph. AGF on the first source as I can't read Chinese, although the third one (which appears to refer to the first one too) supports some of its material. I am not sure if I can find the "cone"/"columnar" layer though. Excluding the Chinese parts which I can't read, seems like none of the material is copied/closely paraphrased/plagiarized by manual analysis or by copyviotools. QPQ is done. First hook needs article link bolded. Both hooks are short enough and suitably sourced, but somewhat bland.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 22:19, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
  • Thanks for your review. The Chinese source does mention the cone and columnar layer, even in the English summary at the end. Here's an ALT2 that's hopefully less bland: Ashorocetus (talk | contribs) 03:31, 1 March 2016 (UTC)
  • @Ashorocetus: Remaining paras now sourced. The closing reviewer may pick the hook. That said, the English part of the Chinese paper does not seem to contain the year numbers.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 20:59, 2 March 2016 (UTC)