Template:Did you know nominations/Christy Jenkins

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:32, 1 July 2016 (UTC)

Christy Jenkins

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Improved to Good Article status by Aoba47 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:58, 22 June 2016 (UTC).

  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/In-Young Ahn
  • Date, size, refs, neutrality, copyvio spotcheck are good, but there is a problem with the hook. I looked at the ref for the nature vs nurture debate ([]) and sadly I do not think it is sufficient to support the hook's claim. All it says is (in the interview with the shows' executive director) is, in the context of the character: "Q:Ah, the age-old nature vs. nurture debate. A: You got it! [It's a question] we've played with and toyed with and worked every way possible over the last eight years, and [for the finale] we would lie to return to it." There is no indication, as the hook suggests, that the nvn debate is particularly central, and at minimum, I'd suggest rewriting the hook to say it is one of many issues related to the character. Interpreting the quote as promotion of nvn debate is also very ORish; of course producers want people to talk about their characters, but the hook makes it seem like her central purpose was to promote the nvn debate. This does not seem to be the case.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:23, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
  • @Piotrus: Thank you for your comment. I have revised the hook and added two more ALTs. Let me know what you think. Aoba47 (talk) 15:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)
  • @Piotrus: I was wondering if you could look at the hook now that I have revised it? Aoba47 (talk) 15:16, 24 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Thank you for your comment. I would prefer to use ALT1 if possible. I agree with your comments on ALT3 and I have eliminated it. Thank you again. Aoba47 (talk) 03:45, 27 June 2016 (UTC)