Talk:Westchester–Putnam Council

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Evrik in topic Rye

Written a bit like an add.

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The article is a good one but, it seems a a bit like a brochure, havng gone to the cam fr the las 4 years I can validate,most of these things but that's not the point, (we can't say things have an amazing view etc. so I marked it with {{advertisement}}. Tennekis 18:46, 29 July 2007

Responding to copy edit request via GOCE

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I started on a major copy edit last night and will resume as time permits over the next few days. If anyone would like to participate just give me a head's up. Thanks. Dtgriffith (talk) 00:52, 23 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

Following-up

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I have worked through this article as far as I can. It lacks verifiable statements and contains some confusing language as a result. The copyedit request will be left on the article until further improvement has been made and final copyedit can be performed. I am happy to collaborate on developing this article further should anyone be interested, I happen to be familiar with the geographic area and even attended Camp Buckskin for a week in 1986. Just contact me on my Talk page. Thanks. Dtgriffith (talk) 17:30, 28 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

Need for article development

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This article is primarily focused on the camps operated by the Westchester-Putnam Council. I have a few suggestions on areas to develop:

  • What other activities or community involvement is the Council a part of?
  • Very little info is offered about most of the camps that are now defunct.
  • History of the Westchester-Putnam Council states the various mergers of the councils preceding its formation. The history can be elaborated on.
  • Many unreferenced statements need to be addressed.

Dtgriffith (talk) 17:47, 28 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

Rye

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  • "LOSS OF RYE'S DURLAND CENTER PART OF BOY SCOUT INVESTIGATION BY HEARST MEDIA". myrye.com. Retrieved 2009-01-29.
  • "RYE TO SCOUTS: GO PITCH A TENT". myrye.com. Retrieved 2009-01-29.
  • "Scouts Dishonor".
  • "Scouts Dishonor".
  • "THE FINAL DESTRUCTION OF RYE'S DURLAND SCOUT CENTER". myrye.com.
  • https://lohud.newspapers.com/search/#query=Durland+Scout+Center

--evrik (talk) 18:23, 20 November 2018 (UTC)Reply