Talk:Richmond, Indiana, facility fire

Notability?

This seems to be to be a non-important event in the grand scheme of things. WP:NEVENT requires a lasting impact, and it may be WP:TOOSOON to see if that is met. BhamBoi (talk) 17:02, 13 April 2023 (UTC)

I don't know, WP:LASTING states It may take weeks or months to determine whether or not an event has a lasting effect. This does not, however, mean recent events with unproven lasting effect are automatically non-notable. If your point is the case, I'm leaning towards draftifying it once again, though should a third opinion also be requested on this? Tails Wx 17:17, 13 April 2023 (UTC)

No, I want it kept, but I know events with no deaths like this often get rejected at AfC or deleted from mainspace at AfD. Like Draft:2023 La Salle fire got rejected, and seems to be to be a similar scale event. BhamBoi (talk) 17:24, 13 April 2023 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 15:41, 21 April 2023 (UTC)

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View of the fire an hour after ignition

• ... that failure to address unsafe building concerns raised in 2019 led to a massive plastics fire in Indiana last month? Source: https://www.cnn.com/2023/04/12/us/indiana-richmond-fire-city-hearing/index.html
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Auto-GPT
  • Comment: If this does not run until May, "this month" should be changed to "last month."

Created by Tails Wx (talk). Nominated by 28bytes (talk) at 12:33, 17 April 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Richmond, Indiana facility fire; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

• I shall review this. Storye book (talk) 15:17, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Nice article, thank you for uploading this. Re copyvio, Earwig finds only proper names and common phrases, so I believe that this article is plagiarism-free.

• Note to promoter: articles about a big fire always draw attention, so I suggest that this one goes to DYK with its picture, please? Storye book (talk) 15:28, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

@Storye book, Tails Wx, and 28bytes: Our article does not state that the unsafe building conditions directly led to the cause of the fire. I do not see the two connected in our article. Bruxton (talk) 02:35, 20 April 2023 (UTC)

@Bruxton: @Tails Wx and 28bytes: I had understood the hook to mean that the hazardous conditions in the building led to the massiveness of the fire, not to the cause of the fire (which apparently started in a truck parked next to the building). But I see what you mean, so I have struck ALT0. Please could we have an ALT1, which matches the source and the article precisely? Thank you. Storye book (talk) 07:56, 20 April 2023 (UTC)

@Bruxton and Storye book: How about this as ALT1:

• ALT1: ... that three years prior to last month's massive plastics fire in Indiana (pictured), a court determined that the site was a fire hazard "unsafe to people and property"? Source: https://www.cnn.com/2023/04/12/us/indiana-richmond-fire-city-hearing/index.html

28bytes (talk) 20:55, 20 April 2023 (UTC)

@28bytes: the hook needs to be in the article and cited. I am not seeing this information in our article. Bruxton (talk) 22:45, 20 April 2023 (UTC)

@Bruxton: Sorry for the oversight, it is in there now. 28bytes (talk) 00:08, 21 April 2023 (UTC)

It works, just need @Storye book: to approve Bruxton (talk) 01:03, 21 April 2023 (UTC)

Good to go, with ALT1 and image (note that if the hook is on the main page in May, the words "this month's" will have to be changed to "last month's".). Storye book (talk) 05:59, 21 April 2023 (UTC)

Promoting, sorry but I did not find the image interesting. Someone can overrule me if they like. Bruxton (talk) 15:40, 21 April 2023 (UTC)

what is this facility actually called?

Like, what was its name at the time of the fire? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 00:35, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

My Way Trading Warehouse, it's supposed to be clarified, right? Tails Wx 00:42, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

gotcha, so maybe this article should be at My Way Trading House fire? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 00:54, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

I'm neutral on this, should a requested move be considered? Tails Wx 01:33, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

Additional sources

• "City of Richmond: Warehouse Fire Information". April 14, 2023.
• "Toxic smoke from Indiana industrial fire forces evacuation order for 2,000". The Washington Post. April 11, 2023.
• "Richmond fire contained, water issues 'frustrating' - Western Wayne News". Western Wayne News. April 11, 2023.

28bytes (talk) 21:55, 27 May 2024 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Richmond, Indiana, facility fire/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Tails Wx (talk · contribs) 16:39, 16 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 22:14, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

I'll review this. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:14, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• "prompting response from emergency managements" → "emergency managements" strikes me as a little strangely-worded, perhaps "emergency management agencies"?
• what is the relevance of the state police responding to a fire?
• "in Preble County, Ohio after" → need comma after "Ohio" per MOS:GEOCOMMA
• "The fire was contained on April 16, six days after the fire started" → repetitive, replace second "the fire" with "it"
• "In the aftermath of the fire, the United States Environmental Protection Agency and Indiana Department of Environmental Management evaluated hazards from the facility fire" → "fire" repeated again, this time I think it makes more sense to nix the first mention

Background

• Remove comma in first sentence
• Mention and link Richmond in the first sentence when you're talking about the facility
• "facility in 2022, after Smith" → remove comma

Fire

• "by Richmond, Indiana mayor" → I don't think you need to specify Indiana since it's been mentioned previously; if you decide to keep it, it needs a comma after it
• "became further problematic" → awkward wording; maybe "became more problematic" or "became more dangerous"?
• "with some bystanders moving close to it" → makes it sound like people got closer because of the explosions
• "Debris from the fire was found as far as New Paris, Ohio and" → need comma after "Ohio"
• "Two firefighters were injured; including one" → comma instead of semicolon

Aftermath

• Overall, this section suffers a bit from WP:PROSELINE as four of five paragraphs begin "On/In [date]..."
• Note EPA and IDEM abbreviations on first mention in this section and just use those rather than full names in the rest of the section
• "from the facility fire several hours" → you can just say "from the fire"; don't need to specify "facility fire" at this point
• "Higher levels of metals" → higher than normal? higher than healthy levels?
• "regarding the building after they had obtained the building" → reword to eliminate repetition
• "removing debris from the site of the facility fire" → "of the fire", as above
• Any reason why metric units (metric tonnes/kg) are used instead of imperial units?
• "from the facility fire site" → "from the site" since you've already described where they took the materials from
• "at the facility fire site" → ditto
• "the City of Richmond" → this phrase is used several times throughout the article but always with "city" in lowercase; this should be consistent

That's what I've got. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:31, 28 June 2024 (UTC)