Talk:Rich Products

Latest comment: 1 year ago by LiamJSP in topic Update Re: Removal of Advert flag

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Hmm - good food —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 12.39.67.171 (talk) 18:43, August 22, 2007 (UTC)

Update Re: Removal of Advert flag

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At the time of this reading, the page seems to have reasonable tone for a corporate page. I used the Heinz (this version) and Kraft Foods (this version) pages for comparison. Perhaps one recommendation worth investigating would be condensing the timeline, as it's pretty sparse under each decade. It could just be a single paragraph of sentences. LiamJSP (talk) 20:55, 27 June 2023 (UTC)Reply