Talk:Mississippi Highway 612

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cameron11598 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cameron11598 (talk · contribs) 23:40, 3 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Good work just a few minor things to correct.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    See comments
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    are there any images available that would improve the article?
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    Good luck improving the article!

Comments

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  • The start of the route description section could be worded better to make the topic clearer.
  • "At Red Creek Church Road, MS 612 travels southeast and into a larger forest"
    • Not sure you need the "and"
  • "small forest" "larger forest" (in the route description section)
    • Which forests?
  • History Section
    • MS 612 was established in 1966, and it was part of a construction project in 1967, with a total cost of $611,248
      • Almost seems like a run-on sentence could probably be separated for better flow.
    • The route has not been changed significantly since.[9][10]
      • Sentence Fragment

--Cameron11598 (Talk) 00:05, 4 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

Fixed all of them I think. The forest doesn't have a name. It's just a group of trees.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 23:52, 4 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

Looks good! --Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:54, 4 January 2017 (UTC)Reply