Talk:Komtar

Latest comment: 3 days ago by Praseodymium-141 in topic GA Review

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Serious rewriting.

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We need rewriting, a reposition of the sections, and integrate the chronology (the table) into the main article. KOMTAR is itself a complex, not the skyscraper, so simply referring KOMTAR as the KOMTAR Tower for its main headline is not suitable. I'll be trying to see what could I do, possibly a rewrite in the future.

We need images for the skyscraper though, the old ones are outdated, and the current image does not put a lot of focus on the building (the fireworks acts as a distraction).

(PenangLion (talk) 14:50, 7 October 2021 (UTC))Reply

UPDATE: User:PenangLion/sandbox IN THE SANDBOX CONTAINS A DRAFT FOR A POSSIBLE REVAMP OF THE PAGE (PenangLion (talk) 09:15, 8 October 2021 (UTC))Reply

Update (2): I am ranking this page as a High-importance article for WikiSkyscrapers.

Reasons are as such:

  • - Tallest skyscraper in Malaysia (1985-1987);
  • - First skyscraper in Malaysia to surpass 200 m (660 ft);
  • - Cultural icon of Penang;
  • - Was among the tallest buildings outside the Western Hemisphere (2nd in 1985-1986, 3rd in 1986-1987);
  • - Important statement of Modernism in Malaysian architecture (Asian architecture would probably be an overstatement);
  • - First urban complex in Penang;
  • - Last project related to Buckminster Fuller in Southeast Asia.

If you have any concerns, please do reply to me, then we can make a change again.
(PenangLion (talk) 16:39, 8 October 2021 (UTC))Reply

After two and a half years I finished the article. Cheers, gavre (al. PenangLion) (talk) 05:16, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Komtar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: PenangLion (talk · contribs) 04:38, 31 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Praseodymium-141 (talk · contribs) 15:12, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply


Hey there! I'll be reviewing this article. 141Pr -\contribs/- 15:12, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (reference section):   b (inline citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:   - Article seems to be stable, I don't see anything wrong with it.
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Initial comments

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Article looks good at a glance, I'll have a closer review in a bit. 141Pr -\contribs/- 15:18, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • There is some sandwiching going on in the construction section - there are just a lot of images in general. Consider removing some or grouping them together.