Talk:Guy Newton (RNZAF officer)/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Ian Rose in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 13:58, 6 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):  
    b. (citations to reliable sources):  
    c. (OR):  
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):  
    I think you could afford to mention his marriage to Marjorie Hutton when it occurred in 1943.
    FWIW I checked a copy of Aces High II and there was no further info on him.
    b. (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):  
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:  

(Criteria marked   are unassessed)

Thanks for the review Ian Rose, I have added mention of his marriage to the WWII section. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:01, 9 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
No prob, all good then. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 09:35, 12 March 2023 (UTC)Reply