Talk:Brownsea Castle/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:11, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:11, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, changes made as per below. Cheers! Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

• One DAB, external links good.
  • Still have DAB to greenhouse.

• Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:40, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

• Images appropriately licensed.
• it was in a very poor condition This maybe a Britishism, but "a" very poor condition reads oddly to me.

• I think it is BritEng thing - I've done a quick Google, and it's not just me! ;)

• 4 feet (1.2 m) high Remember how to format the template for the adjectival form from my last review of yours?

• Adj=on should now be applied. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
  • It's a little more complicated than that. Use {{convert|4|ft|m|adj=mid|-long|1}} as a model, substituting high for long, etc., as needed. I did one of them already to make sure that it works. Don't forget to delete the extra adjective that will follow from your original phrasing.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:22, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

• Done. I don't think "across" needs it... Hchc2009 (talk) 18:40, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

• the ferrying rits in 1581 typo, I think.

• Yup, fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

• What's the connection between Charles Sturt and the Napoleonic Wars?

I've clarified a bit more, but the source was unclear about what he was actually doing in it. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

• Is it Jacobethean or Jacobean? I've seen the latter, but never the former.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:13, 1 August 2015 (UTC)

It should be Jacobethan (I can't see Jacobethean) - the wikilink gives some more background on it. It refers to a mock form of Jacobean. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

• • OK, I guess that I should have pursued the link a bit more diligently.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:22, 11 August 2015 (UTC)