Talk:Bless Me Indeed (Jabez's Song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 00:59, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Please remove the "Chronology" parameter form the infobox; thanks
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Add the year 2000 in parentheses after the title of the book The Prayer of Jabez please
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Background and composition

Paragraph 1

• Again, please add the year 2000 in parentheses after the title of the book The Prayer of Jabez so it appears exactly as so: "The Prayer of Jabez (2000)"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
  • No source for the sentence that describes where the song was recorded; please add one
    • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

• Looks good! :D
  • Great! Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Reception and chart performance

• If you wanted, I would even turn this into two separate sections
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 1

• The 'm' in "Allmusic" needs to be capitalized
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
• Are there any other reviews available this section is quite small; perhaps some album reviews that include this track?
  • I worked extensively on the album this song is on, Almost There, and out of those I got the reviews mentioned here. I could only find one more review, from Amazon (http://www.amazon.com/Almost-There-MercyMe/dp/B000062Y7I). Is that reliable or no? Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

• @Toa Nidhiki05: Yes! That one is reliable! Carbrera (talk) 19:21, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

• Nothing to say here! :)

Credits and personnel

• Remove the parentheses around "Credits from the album liner notes"; it's unnecessary
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
• Unlink "MercyMe", they are already linked several times in this article
  • done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Charts

• Looks good

Other notes

• Mainly, please take care of the copyright notice at the header of the article
  • Frankly not sure what to do with it. The copyright justification used on the song File:Bless Me Indeed.ogg is standard. There's nothing wrong with it - it's low-quality, less than 10% of the song, etc. The only reason it is tagged is I had a user come through and decide to tag several of my pages at good article for whatever reason . His justification here was "Incomplete non-free use rationale. Picky, but this is at GAC". Pretty sure I can't remove the notice myself. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
• Add an "External links" section that includes a MetroLyrics link to the official lyrics of the song
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
• The category "Debut singles" could be added since this is technically MercyMe's debut single
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

End of GA Review:

A very short article, but with great depth and good use of resources. I will place on hold for seven days to allow the nominator to make any changes, good luck! Carbrera (talk) 01:08, 3 June 2016 (UTC)