Talk:Beat of My Heart

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Beat of My Heart/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 22:43, 7 January 2013 (UTC)

Infobox

• No Issues. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• since its inception. ---> I find this kind of vague, why it's just can't be release? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)

  Well, the song was performed on tour before it was actually released.  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 01:16, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

• Alright then. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:14, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Development

• MTV News should not be italicized — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
• The song was finally mastered by Joe Gastwirt. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)

•  Done  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 01:16, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

Composition

• It carries ---> How about it contains? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• An "overcompensating" guitar strums at a "feverish pace" throughout the song. ---> Maybe merge it with the previous sentence, because it's kind of odd on itself. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• Euro pop ---> europop. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• In the chorus, she says ---> she sings i guess? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• she speaks ---> Again sings or some synonym. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

•  All done, with the exception of Euro pop, as it is from a quote.  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:06, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Critical response

• Suggestion: maybe have Reception as main section and critical and commercial as subsections? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• Rest looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Commercial performance

• Looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Music video

• Good job. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Live performances

• Good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Formats and track listings

• Good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

• There's WP:OVERLINK, unlink please. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

•  Done  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:06, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Charts

• Looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

References

• Ref. 13. misses publisher — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• Ref. 16. doesn't have accessdate — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• Refs. 17, 18, 19, same, missing accessdate — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• Ref. 23. some linking please. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• Ref. 25. MTV ---> MTV News. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• Ref. 26. wrong formatting. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• Ref. 28. misses publisher. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
• When you link ref 23, unlink 34 — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

•  Done I believe all of this has been resolved.  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:06, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

• Okay passing this now. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 22:02, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 2 external links on Beat of My Heart. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20120926104503/http://www.videostatic.com/vs/2005/week38/index.html to http://www.videostatic.com/vs/2005/week38/index.html#entry-6562815
• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20140127032217/http://www.aria.com.au/pages/PhysicalSingles2006.htm to http://www.aria.com.au/pages/PhysicalSingles2006.htm

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at {{Sourcecheck}}).

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

• If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
• If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 11:09, 29 October 2016 (UTC)

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified one external link on Beat of My Heart. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20080827212557/http://uk.music.ign.com/articles/642/642502p1.html to http://uk.music.ign.com/articles/642/642502p1.html

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

• If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
• If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 22:43, 15 January 2018 (UTC)