Talk:Answers Research Journal

Latest comment: 15 hours ago by Ldm1954 in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 17:55, 16 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Created by Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 22:48, 22 May 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   LGTM, tho I don't love the hook. Given that this is Psuedoscience territory, it might be best to err on the side of being a bit verbose.

How about ALT 1: ... that according to one creationist journal, HIV has its origins in the Fall?

Thoughts Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d? Sohom (talk) 21:59, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Sohom Datta, Alt1 looks good to me! Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 23:37, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Approved, per above. Sohom (talk) 00:36, 5 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Can I offer an even more direct alternative hook? And Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d, if you're not feeling this, you can strike it. Rjjiii (talk) 19:16, 10 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
I prefer the Alt1 hook still. Alt2 just seems a bit wordy. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 19:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Answers Research Journal/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d (talk · contribs) 19:06, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Ldm1954 (talk · contribs) 14:07, 30 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

I can review this. Initial indications are that it meets GA, but I will do more analysis this week. Ldm1954 (talk) 14:07, 30 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Ldm1954, thank you very much for taking up this review. If you have feedback for me, I most likely won’t be able to respond until July 8th. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 16:50, 4 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
A basic point: I think the article is too aggressive in places and includes not-neutral words which are not needed, and might be considered as OR. A couple of examples with words that could be removed are:
  • A 2009 article spuriously proposes
  • His thesis, incorrectly
In both cases it could be argued that a source is needed for the word I have stricken out. Those were the most obvious, please go through and check, letting the sourced material tell the story -- which is clearly very strong. Please let me know when you are done Ldm1954 (talk) 11:19, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply