Talk:Agent Carter season 2/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk ·02:50, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

• Grabbing this for a review if that is okay with you. I have seen about half of the first season of this and I am really enjoying it (which is a lot since I am usually indifferent about comic book media). I will have my comments up soon. Aoba47 (talk) 02:50, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Thanks Aoba. Myself or Adam will be sure to get to your comments once you add them. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 04:01, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

Overall comments

• Make sure to add an alt to the image in the infobox.
• Put the years that Captain America: The First Avenger and the Agent Carter film were released.
• I would recommend replacing the “,and” in the final sentence of the third paragraph of the “Lead” with a semicolon to prevent any ambiguity that the criticism of the season led to the show's cancellation.
• In the “Development” subsection, add “for” between “allow” and “any” so it reads “this would probably not allow for any standalone episodes”.
• Break up the sentence with the quotes from Atwell about diversity in the fourth paragraph of the “Writing” subsection. I would suggest starting a new sentence at “and saying”. The large quote overwhelms the sentence so it may help to separate into a new one.
• Add the descriptive term “the films” in front of the list of films in the “Design” subsection for clarity. Same for the list in the “Filming” subsection.

Final comments

• @Adamstom.97: @Favre1fan93: Great job with this article. I could not find much to improve actually so I apologize for the brief nature of my review. Let me know if you have any questions or comments about my review. Once you addressed all aspects of my review, I will review this page one last time and it should be a quick and easy pass. Aoba47 (talk) 04:33, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Thanks again Aoba, I believe I have addressed all of your concerns. - adamstom97 (talk) 05:06, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
    • Thank you for your quick response. Excellent work again on this article (and with the other Agent Carter articles as well). ✓ Pass Aoba47 (talk) 05:14, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
      • Thanks Aoba47. If you were up to it and willing, we have Jessica Jones (season 1) waiting for a GA review and List of Marvel Cinematic Universe television series at FL, if you'd like to look either over for us. Thanks again. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 05:51, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
        • Thank you for the comment. I am currently pretty busy with school and work at the moment (I have a bad habit with procrastinating like crazy on here), but I am definitely interested in doing a review on Jessica Jones (season 1) sometime in the near future. It helps that I was already interested in the show in the first place. I will probably not be able to do it for a little bit if that is okay. Aoba47 (talk) 06:01, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
          • No worries. Just letting you know. If it's still not done by the time you have the chance, that would be great. Thanks again. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 19:30, 1 June 2016 (UTC)